18 Feb 2008 04:53:16 | Winn Griffin
How To Write Letters That Win was published in 1909 and
demonstrates how to build business letters that command
attention, stir desire, and bring orders. It will show you how
to put the personal touch into letter-handling inquiries,
complaints, and collections. There are actual letters that have
brought results included. The readers can see 247 vital pointers
gathered from a study of 1200 actual letters.
Here a selection for you to read and put to use.
What is the most important factor in the transaction
of your business? What medium plays the greatest part in selling
your goods, collecting your accounts, keeping, you in touch with
the other elements concerns and individuals-that make your
business possible? Run your mind up and down the essentials in
your every day work and lay your mental finger upon the one most
indispensable.
You cant miss it. Its the business letter.
The first claim on your attention each morning after you have
hung up your hat and drawn a chair to your desk is the mornings
mail. You run through it and you are back again in the hum of
things. It has put you in touch with the run of your own
affairs, just as your morning paper has laid before you a mental
picture of what the world did yesterday.
Now you take your turn and you dispose of each of those letters
as the purposes and policy of your business dictate. Through the
medium of your replies and your own letters to others you buy
and sell, you give directions, counsel and advice, you cover a
thousand subjects-you play the whole game of business over your
own desk. And all through the medium of the business letter.
If there has been one development in the past generation that
has contributed more than any other to business growth it has
been the development of the business letter. Letters-right
letters-are no longer the mere stereotyped paper mediums of
solicitation and acknowledgment. They are living, breathing
personalities, with all the capabilities and characteristics of
the men behind them.
Forty years ago the only letters that showed symptoms of
red-blooded authorship were impassioned love missives and the
opinionated chronicles of statesmanship. Then someone,
somewhere, conceived the idea that human interest could be woven
into a business letter as well as into a personal message, that
a business letter, after all, was but a personal message and
that it was possible to talk to a man a thousand miles away in
the same words that you would use if he sat beside your desk.
That discovery, developed, has of itself dissolved distance and
placed the inter-relationship of business men upon a basis of
courtesy and intimacy that no other could accomplish. And more
important, it has made possible the transaction of an enormous
bulk of business at an insignificant fraction of what personal
handling of it would have cost. Eighty-five million dollars in
sales made by one house last year entirely by mail-that is a
specific example of results.
As the possibilities of the business letter have been realized,
it has leaped all the restricted boundaries of former usage.
Today the letter, the right letter, remember-does whatever the
personal representative can do. It sells goods, collects money,
adjusts complaints, carries on the routine of business with all
the efficiency of the individual behind it.
Used rightly, it is in many respects a better medium than a
personal representative. Certainly it has all the advantage on
cost. A sales letter entails no heavy traveling expenses, hotel
bills and entertainment charges; a red stamp carries it the
length of the land. Neither does it cool its heels in the outer
office and conjure methods to reach the chief within; the
courtesy of the mail lays it upon his desk. It follows up
persistently when repeated personal calls would be impossible.
It is a salesman that says no more and no less than the merchant
or manufacturer desires. It makes no false representations, no
verbal promises that cannot be lived up to. It is the perfect
servant of the user.
But, you may say to all this, that you do not do business by
mail. True, you may not conduct a mail order business. But you
do have use for correspondence. You may sell your goods entirely
through salesmen, yet there never was a sales force so good that
it could not get more business with the help of letters from the
house.
Correspondence as you use it may serve the simplest needs of
routine-the acknowledgement of orders, the notification of
shipments-yet there is never a letter goes out in your mail that
does not have the possibilities of a business getting touch. If
you stop with the acknowledgement or the notification, you miss
an opportunity. Go beyond and talk to the man. Look at your
letter through his eyes, shift yourself over into his attitude,
consider, what you would do if you got that letter. Do that a
few times and you will soon be wondering why you didn't rub the
machine finish off your correspondence long ago, take the
man-to-man attitude and talk business through the mail. There is
a place for real letters in every business and your is one of
them.
Or you say that you have tried the sales letter and it has
failed. Do not indict the letter for its failure. Its
possibilities are there. Indict yourself rather along with the
hundreds of thousands of other businessmen who have neglected to
make the most of a medium that waits to do service at a minimum
of cost.
The business letter is the biggest opportunity for expansion
that you have today. Employed intelligently, it will find you
customers, it will sell your goods, or help your salesman to
sell them, it will make your name known wherever mail service
penetrates.
But the business-winning letter must be the product of the most
analytical thought. If it is to serve as a salesman it must be
created with all the care that you would train a salesman before
you would permit him to sell your gods. If your argument is to
convince it must be planned logically, if your description is to
paint a mental picture it must be clear, if your appeal for
action is to get results it must be a real appeal with real
inducement. You must know your readers point of contact and aim
your letters there.
Study your sales letters. Study every letter that goes out over
your name. Does it play the part it should in your business?
Give it a chance. The subsequent chapters of this book tell you
how.
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