14 Mar 2008 02:21:36 | Donald Lee
Have you ever wondered why your perfectly fine classified ad
fails to attract the attention you desire? There should be
dozens-no, hundreds-of perspective buyers swamping your e-mail
inbox with offers. After all, you are offering a mint baseball
card, a vintage coat, pristine used car, those wholesale-priced
sporting goods, and whatever other attractive items are in your
inventory. Instead, you only have a slow trickle of questions, a
handful of sales. What gives? More than likely, your sales are
slow because you have not mastered the three techniques of
writing a classic classified ad.
Of course, give yourself credit for recognizing one important
facet of today's selling world. You decided to sell your stuff
at an online classified site. As anybody in the business knows,
online classified ads get you more privacy, a broader selection
of buyers, and a wealth of tools to help you keep tabs on your
transactions. When compared to a newspaper, cyberspace is also a
wee bit more spacious. There are billions of pages on the Web,
and only a few dozen in your typical neighborhood rag. For you,
that means a lot more space for your ad to say the least.
With that space, however, comes great responsibility-and great
potential. The extra room gives you the freedom to include as
much product description and sale copy as you want. You can't
just slap together a whole bunch of information, though. You
need to use the three special ad writing techniques that will
attract buyers and seal the deal: attention, interest, and
action.
Attention. Make sure the buyer stops at your ad instead of the
thousands upon thousands of others out there in cyberspace. Your
ad's title is the first lure to grab his or her attention, and
the first component of a catchy title is the item's best
feature, whether it's the price, the item's rarity, or its
popularity. Next, be sure the title includes keywords or other
synonyms for your item that a buyer might use in a search. For
instance, a buyer could search for "automobile" instead of
"car," "pullover" instead of "sweater."
Interest. Once you have the buyer's attention, hook them with
details. There is a direct relationship between the amount of
information you provide and the number of sales you'll make. So
describe the item as completely as possible-size, color,
material, designer, model-and provide a clear, digital photo to
finish the job where your words leave off. Even offer your
prospective customer the item's history if possible.
Also, try to list as many possible benefits that your sales item
could offer the buyer. Come up with some that the buyer probably
wouldn't think of on his or her own. And zone in on specific
benefits. Use what you already know about your target. For
instance, if you were selling a car, you know that whoever is
looking at your ad is in need of a vehicle. If your car is
compact, perhaps the buyer is in search of great gas mileage. Or
perhaps it's power he or she wants if your car is a sports model.
Action. Finish your ad strongly. Don't just suggest to the buyer
that you offer a great deal. Tell them it's a fantastic offer
that they can't pass up. Use phrases like "Call me now before
someone else does" or "Buy now, this opportunity won't last
long." Be cordial while you're pressing the issue, of course.
Thank them for reading your ad and make sure they know you
appreciate their business.
Most importantly, your customers will also value your honesty
throughout the whole ad. So whether it's the attention,
interest, or action you're shooting for, never lie or
exaggerate. Go so far to include any defects if your product is
not in mint shape. Your honesty will build trust, and trust
above all else makes an ad work. What's more, it makes for
repeat customers.
Remember, if you use all three of these elements-or four if you
include honesty. When you're finished with it, it should read
something like the two examples below.
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Example 1: Discover the beauty of a Forest Hill Home 2500 sq.
ft. home, 4 bedroom, 3 baths, double garage, upgraded kitchen,
12 ft. ceilings This open concept house is situated in a
historical landmark district of Rhode Island. It's a wonderful
neighborhood to raise your family, with nearby schools and
amenities.
(Insert your image or photo here.)
Call for an on-site appointment. Thanks for looking!
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Example 2: Looking for an inexpensive used car that drives well?
only $4,950. 2003 Honda Civic, Limited Edition, 65,000 miles,
manual transmission, CD, AM/FM radio, power steering, low
maintenance. Great on gas - this car will save you $$$ on high
gasoline prices.
(Insert your image or photo here.)
Send me a message now. Thanks for looking!
About Author :
Donald Lee is the public relations manager for
Buysellcommunity.com. Buysellcommunity provides free classified
listing services for individuals and businesses to market their
products and services online. For global and localized
classifieds, please visit
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