09 Mar 2008 03:50:23 | Steven Barnes
During a career spanning twenty-five years of novel, film, and
television work, I've two major tools most valuable: the yogic
"chakras" for characterization, and Joseph Campbell's model of
the Hero's Journey for plot structure.
These are not random choices, nor were they selected because of
the many intelligent and thoughtful essays on their relationship
to successful film or world myth.
Rather, they are important because they create a connection
between the inner world of the writer, and the external world of
the finished work--and the reader.
A plot structure is nothing more than a tool for organizing
events in temporal sequence. While there are more such
structures than there are professional writers, few of them meet
what thousands of students consider a critical test: are they
actually easy to use and apply? A simple tool, however limited,
can be of greater use than a complicated tool that requires
years to master. Remember: you will achieve real quality in your
writing only by mastering your basics.
The Hero's Journey, extracted from thousands of years of world
mythology, has the advantage of actually mimicking the path of
life itself. The "three act structure" does not. After
all...life isn't divided into three, or five, or eight acts.
Such divisions can be useful tools, but they should never be
mistaken for some kind of "truth" about existence. In
comparison, note this interpretation (there are others) of the
steps of the Hero's Journey, and to explain them, we'll look at
the first Star Wars movie, "Episode IV, A New Hope":
1) Hero Confronted With A Challenge. "Come with me, Luke, learn
the ways of the Force." This is pretty clear, right? There has
to be a challenge, or a beckoning, or the character won't begin
to change--and all great writing is about change.
2) Hero Initially rejects the challenge, :I promised Uncle Owen
I'd work on the moisture evaporators." A real challenge, one
that can provoke real change, will be frightening and exciting.
A character will usually have some reservations.
3) Hero accepts the challenge. Luke's aunt and uncle are killed,
freeing him from his oath. If your character doesn't accept the
challenge, there is no story--unless the story is about the
consequences of not accepting responsibility.
4) The Road of trials. Traveling to the desert town and cantina,
getting on Han Solo's spaceship, traveling to other planets,
etc. This is the section where locations and sequence interact.
The character travels, learns, commits actions that force
inter-action with the environment, and the environment responds
positively or negatively, with greater and greater stakes as the
story proceeds.
5) Gaining Allies and Powers. Luke meets Han Solo, and
Chewbacca, and Obi-Wan, and Princess Leia. He learns of the
Force, and the use of Light Sabers, and how to fly and fight and
rescue princesses. If your character doesn't have to grow in
order to resolve the problem, you may have chosen the wrong
problem or character!
6) Initial Confrontation with Evil, and defeat. Obi-Wan's death.
Or possibly the disastrous attack on the Death Star. One is
private and emotional, the other spectacular and physical.
7) Dark Night of the Soul. The moment of greatest weakness. Luke
begins to believe he cannot win, and everything he loves will
die.
8) Leap of Faith. "Trust your Feelings, Luke." The leap of Faith
is always faith in one of three things: faith in self, faith in
your companions, or faith in a higher power. In "Star Wars" it
is all three! This may be the only time in the history of cinema
that this was true, and helps to explain why George Lucas is a
billionaire.
9) Confront Evil--victorious. The Death Star blows up.
10) Student Becomes the Teacher. Luke is presented with medals,
which establish him as a role model.
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The above ten steps are not some cookie-cutter pattern. They are
the combined world wisdom about the path of life itself, the
process we go through in achieving any worthwhile goal. There
will be fear. There will be defeat. We will need to gain new
skills and friends and partners. We must be clear on our
acceptance of goals and responsibility. We must have faith. And
ultimately, if we have struggled, and learned, and sacrificed,
and moved through our fear...we learn and grow and succeed. And
then we teach others. This is the pattern of life, and any time
you organize information and events into a pattern even vaguely
reminiscent of this, the human nervous system, worldwide, will
recognize it as story.
It is NOT some kind of cure-all for bad story tellers. What
these ten steps are is something analogous to the eighty-eight
keys of a piano. Understand the emotional and life significance
of each step, and then "play them" as your developed instincts
dictate. Make your own kind of music. The pattern has worked for
about thirty thousand years. It will work for you, too.
About Author :
NY Times Bestselling writer Steven Barnes has published over
three million words of fiction, and wrote the Emmy-Winning "A
Stitch In Time" episode of the Outer Limits. He is the creator
of Lifewriting, the first body-mind high-performance system for
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