08 Mar 2008 12:27:47 | Shaun Fawcett
At some point along the way, most of us have used what are
commonly called "fill-in-the-blank" writing templates. We might
have used them to write a letter, format an essay, or set-up a
resume or CV.
You know what I'm talking about here. It's those form letter
templates that you see in many writing texts and workbooks.
FILL-IN-THE-BLANK TEMPLATES
For example, in the case of a letter, a "fill-in-the-blank"
template would look something like this:
Dear [NAME OF RECIPIENT]:
This is to advise you that your probation period in the position
[POSITION NAME] expired on [DATE].
The [NAME OF REVIEW COMMITTEE] met on [DATE OF MEETING] and
determined that your probationary appointment was successful and
that you should be immediately appointed to [NAME OF POSITION]
[NAME OF ORGANIZATIONAL UNIT].
Accordingly, this is to inform you that effective [DATE OF
APPOINTMENT] you are officially appointed to the position of
[NAME OF POSITION] for an initial period of [NUMBER OF
YEARS/MONTHS]. Terms and conditions of your employment are
covered by [OFFICIAL CONTRACT NAME/NUMBER].
Would you please report as soon as possible to [NAME OF
OFFICIAL], [TITLE OF OFFICIAL] in the [OFFICIAL NAME OF HR
GROUP] so that the details of your appointment may be properly
documented.
Congratulations [NAME OF APPOINTEE]. All of us at [COMPANY OR
ORGANIZATION NAME] look forward to working with you in the
future.
Sincerely,
[NAME AND TITLE OF ORIGINATOR]
Although this "fill-in-the-blank" approach can work, it has a
number of shortcomings as follows:
DISADVANTAGES OF FILL-IN-THE-BLANK TEMPLATES
- Because of their generic nature, they tend to generalize so
much that they resemble a computer generated form letter.
- They don't provide specific information on how a professional
would properly fill in the required information [BLANKS].
- They don't provide mental stimulation or show how a
professional might word the letter in a specific real-life
context.
- The content is typically watered down to try and cover every
possible situation.
- Thus, they are virtually useless for 98% of real-life
situations, since they lack real-life content.
REAL-LIFE TEMPLATES
On the other hand, here's what a "real-life" template would look
like for a similar situation:
Dear Jessica:
This is to advise you that your probation period in the position
Customer Service Agent (Temporary) expired on November 30, 2001.
The Staffing Review Committee met late last week and determined
that your probationary appointment was successful and that you
should be immediately appointed as Customer Service Agent
(Ongoing).
Accordingly, this is to inform you that effective December 1,
2001 you are officially appointed to the position of Customer
Service Agent in the Customer Support Group for an initial
period of 36 months. Terms and conditions of your employment are
covered by the Customer Service Group Employment Agreement.
Would you please report as soon as possible to Jim Jackson,
Chief of Human Resources so that the details of your appointment
may be properly documented.
Congratulations Jessica! All of us here at MedWay Systems Inc.
look forward to continuing to work with you in the future.
Sincerely,
Sharon Smithson Manager, Customer Support Group
ADVANTAGES OF REAL-LIFE TEMPLATES
Clearly, the "model" that most of us would rather work with, if
we had to write a similar letter, is definitely the second one,
the "real-life" template.
You can relate to it. It talks about real-life people in a
real-life situation that you can identify with. And, you get to
see exactly how a professional worded it.
There are other advantages to "real-life" templates.
Fully-Formatted Final Versions: "Real-life" templates are
fully-formatted as final documents so that you can see exactly
how they looked when they were sent out in a "real-life"
situation. They don't look like some kind of "draft" form letter.
Content With Value: Working with "real-life" templates, it is
much easier to adapt them to YOUR actual situations because they
give you visual and intellectual cues that you can relate to.
Naturally, when you see how a copywriter or consultant has dealt
with a "real-life" scenario, in terms of word choice, context,
and punctuation, it is much easier to adapt to the real-life
situation that you are writing for. In that way, the actual
content has value.
Easy To Work With: "Real-life" templates are just as easy to
work with as other templates. You simply load them into your
word processing program and edit and adjust them to fit your own
specific situation. Presto! You have a fully formatted real-life
letter ready to be printed and sent out in the mail.
You also have the comfort of knowing that what you are sending
has already been used in other "real-life" situations.
Real-Life Content: With real-life templates, it is much easier
to find an adaptable "fit" for the situation you are writing
for. Not only do they give you the final format of a document,
their content provides an excellent real-life sample and gives
food-for-thought to assist you in the writing process.
SAMPLE REAL-LIFE TEMPLATES
For illustration purposes, here are a couple of sample
"real-life" letter templates and one "real-life" resume template
from my Writing Help Central web site:
http://www.writinghelp-central.com/cover-letter.html
http://www.writinghelp-central.com hank-you-letter.html
http://www.writinghelp-central.com/resume-sample2.html
Now I ask you, would you rather work from a "fill-in-the-
blanks" generic template. or a fully-formatted "real-life"
template?
About Author :
Shaun Fawcett is webmaster of writinghelp-central.com and author
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