25 Feb 2008 10:10:29 | Amrit Hallan
The first thing I learnt after writing my first copy was – it
all boils down to how much your copy sells. No matter how good
it is, no matter if it beats Hemingway and Dickens in the
efficient employment of language, if it does not sell, it is
worthless.
Whenever you sit down to work on a new copy or edit an old one,
just keep one thing in mind: how you can deliver “the message”
in minimum words. Remember that literature written for the sake
of promoting a product or a service needs to be succinct and
direct, and above all, understandable. The average reader of
your literature is a person who is in a hurry. He/she is
bombarded with similar messages already (and he/she might be
cynical).
Keep the end result in mind and create the copy around that.
Relinquish your inherent proclivities and biases, and just focus
on the message. Present the copy in a way that it is highly
informative, convincing, and compelling. Before sitting down to
write, think of your target readership. Are they children? Are
they housewives? Are they teenagers? Are they hardcore
technocrats and scientists? Formulate your language and
presentation according to that.
A method I find useful is, make a list of all the words that can
be associated with the current copywriting project. It is fun,
and it helps you create supersets, sets and subsets of your
project.
I have seen many copies where the creative writers lose focus,
get carried away with their “creativity”, and end up creating a
message that can win accolades as a piece of art, but makes no
sale for the client. The way you present your message should not
dominate the actual message. Your writing style should not
impede the actual message and end up creating a distraction.
I myself am a writer. It is often extremely hard to resist the
temptation of sprinkling the powder of my style on the copy, but
I have to resist it for the sake of the message (and my income).
I have learnt to become detached. I keep telling myself: it’s
just a copy for my client for which I’m getting paid, and it is
not a piece of literature that I’m creating to further the cause
of my art.
This is the age of information. I don’t know if it is true or
not, it used to take an entire life-time in the eighteenth
century to process the amount of information we process in a
single day. With so much information (most of it is junk, by the
way) around, it becomes difficult both for the reader and the
writer to pinpoint the right tone and pitch. With so much fraud
around, it becomes difficult to establish credibility.
That’s what differentiates you from the others. Project your
message in a way that it immediately grabs attention.
In the morning I was watching “Meet Joe Black” on HBO, (today is
Sunday) and there was one scene in the movie when Anthony
Hopkins and Brad Pitt were walking down a busy street. There
were scores of people around them; still, they both were
prominently visible even from a distance. I noticed that only
they were wearing dark clothes. Everybody in the crowd wore
light shaded clothes. I found the scene very fascinating. This
is how a focus should be created. Your message should be
different from the rest of the crowd.
It should hit the right nerve instantly, from the first sentence
itself. Your first sentence should make the reader think, “Ok,
this is something worth taking note of.”
Without sounding melodramatic, make your message as moving as
you can afford to. Don’t be too personal if you are not a known
personality and the majority of your target audience is a
stranger to you. Still, messages that address to individual
readers are more appealing.
Try to start with a “You” or “Your” or “Yours?” Messages
starting with a highlighted question also incite a response.
Keep your sentences short, with lesser commas and semi-colons.
If you have abundant space, use bullets to highlight major
points – they are easy to read and are generally to the point.
There are no strict rules for the sort of words you should use.
Particular words should appeal to the particular target-segment.
Mainly, keep things simple and to the point. Use dabs of humor
wherever possible. Once I wrote a short story around the service
of my client – they are a detective agency.
Copywriting is all about sincerity. You’ll sound monotonous and
clichéd if you are not sure of the motive of your copy. To sound
credible, you should believe in the authentic intentions of your
client. Never write for a product/service that is intended to
cause harm to your readers.
In the end, practice and study. After all, copywriting is a
profession, so it has its no’s and yeses. Be observant. Study
everything around you, and read the copies of other writers
carefully. Always keep notes of things you can use. And…write a
lot.
About Author :
Amrit Hallan is a freelance copywriter, copy editor and a
writer. He also optimizes web page content for higher Search
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