24 Feb 2008 02:49:17 | L P King
Nothing ticks me off more than an Author
who is constantly changing and revising their book after
publication. Some Authors do this every couple of weeks and it
is as though they are obsessed with a perfection very few of
them will ever attain. I find it very frustrating and there I am
thinking, Go away and stop wasting my
time. Eventually I will snap and tell them enough
is enough and that they have to pull their heads in or the tiger
will come down from the Mountain.
It is easy enough to change e-books but there is still time
involved; and it is time that you should not be asking your
Publisher to expend. Changing print books is a little more
involved (and expensive). There is a more serious reason why we
don’t allow constant changing of manuscripts though and that has
to do with professionalism. Publishers do not exist to be
sounding boards for Writers and Websites (even ones located in
Australia) do not exist for Writers to test the waters with
their work. By the time you come on board with us it should be a
given that you are a writing professional. It is time for the
serious stuff and yet so many Writers are blissfully unaware of
the message this act of changing their manuscript sends out to
both the Publisher and the Reader.
Basically it says you are a dork. No apologies for that. You are
unprofessional. You have not finished your job. You are still at
the kindergarten stage.
And… you have not learned when to let go. No one will deny the
writing process is intense and if you are really good at it you
will be consumed by it. Spending time writing a book can be a
solitary experience but it is one that can also lead to
tremendous insight and personal fulfilment. You generally know
you are on a winner if you get to know (and like) your
characters to such an extent that they are so real you can have
a conversation with them in your head. This is what I call “the
higher plane” and once you reach that level you will experience
a euphoria that confirms that yes, you ARE a Writer.
The process of writing should begin with a clear idea and lots
of planning, drawing up of outlines and character sketches and
so forth. The jig-saw puzzle will get bigger every day you
write. By the time your book is finished you should know every
aspect of it inside out. You should be able to quote whole
passages from it and you should know exactly why the character
in Chapter Six felt the sudden urge to chop off his
mother-in-law’s head. You should know that you will be toying
with your Reader’s emotions when you choose certain imagery and
symbolism and the reward should be that you can anticipate the
effect they will have on your Reader.
Heavy stuff. And when you are “finished” the real work begins.
All the analyzing and editing, re-writing, seeking other
opinions and road-testing your product. I’d say the majority of
Authors who need to constantly change their work do not have
enough confidence in their ability to trust their own instincts.
So what do they do? Oooooooh, this is the scary bit. They take
the plunge… and show their spouse. No one else, just their
spouse or some other close relative. Instead of seeking the help
of a professional like an Editor or at the very least an
experienced Writer, they leave it to someone who is going to say
all the right things (read things they want to hear). Hence the
questions remain unresolved. The doubt lingers on.
Everyone needs help in these initial stages. The book should be
sorted out from a technical perspective before you go off and
start garnering interest from potential Readers. I have a person
whom I have known for about 25 years who looks at my stuff. I
got to know her all those years ago when we were co-editors of a
local interest Newsletter. She is a former Tertiary English
Teacher who is highly qualified and I do not know anyone more
suited to being a literary critic. She is also brutally honest.
She does not let our friendship get in the way of her opinions.
She has tremendous analytical skills and if something stinks she
tells me so - and I respect that. I respect her knowledge of
language and the fact that she knows what works in certain
situations and what does not. I am very lucky to have her to
keep me on the straight and narrow and I would urge all Writers
to seek out someone like this.
So… you can get help from a professional but that is still only
part of the whole deal. Let’s go back to YOU. Forget talking to
other people – the final decision is yours. You have to at some
stage be prepared to ask yourself, Is this book the
best it can possibly be? Have I done all I can? Am I satisfied
with it? If you come up with any negatives at this
stage then the answer is… You are not finished.
Put the thing in a draw, take a break and come back and start
again and then ask the same questions down the track. A lot of
Authors rush in and try and place their work with Publishers
before they have resolved all their own writing issues. And
sometimes the manuscripts are accepted and the publishing ball
starts rolling. And then the trouble starts.
Do yourselves a favour and make sure you are not in the dork
category. Your baby has been born, you have fed and nurtured it
and the time will come when you have to let it go. A true
professional will know instinctively when to let go because they
are honest enough with themselves to be able to say that
everything feels right. YOU will know after you have done
everything you possibly can and you can be satisfied that you
have done a good job. That is really all anybody can possibly
hope to do - be satisfied. Your book is in the lap of the gods
now. It is no longer your property. It belongs to your Readers.
Deal with that.
About Author :
L P King is an Australian Writer, Publisher and Principal of
Mountain Mist Productions -