24 Feb 2008 12:33:15 | Jimmy Sweeney
Suppose you were the hiring manager, your desk piled high with
cover letters and resumes to sort through. Which of the
following cover letter greetings would grab your attention?
Example #1:
Dear Sirs: Dear Sir/Madam: Dear Gentlemen: To whom it may
concern:
Example #2:
Dear Manager: Dear HR Director: Dear Human Resources:
Example #3:
Dear Mrs. Thomas: Dear Mr. Friedman: Dear Sally Williams:
Clearly Example #3 is the best of the bunch because the
job-seeker has taken time to find out your name and to spell it
correctly.
Consider how you'd feel if you received a cover letter that said
Dear Sir or Madam, or worse yet, 'To whom it may concern.' No
one will be concerned if you address your cover letter to no one
in particular!
Remember, there is nothing as sweet to the ear as the sound of
ones name.
Exercise this simple secret and your cover letter will rise to
the top of the pile!
"But I don't know who to address my cover letter to!"
If you don't have this information, take time to get it. Call
the company. For jobs posted online this may be a challenge. But
still, go the extra mile. Then at the very least address your
letter to the appropriate entity. Example: Hiring manager; HR
Director; etc.
Secret Tip For Emergency Situations
If the name is unavailable, use one of the greetings in Example
#2 and add this personal note.
Please Note: I'm sorry for this impersonal greeting on my cover
letter. I was unable to get your name online. However, I look
forward to the opportunity to meet you in person so I can
address you by name and discuss this job opening. I am highly
interested in working for {company name}.
This one-two punch would surely grab someone's attention. You
are showing your respect and more important, that you care.
This secret tip alone quickly turns a potential negative into a
positive that could make the difference between acceptance and
rejection.
The bottom line: When you target your cover letter to a specific
person by name, you greatly increase your chances of landing the
interview, and ultimately the job you desire.
So before you write your next cover letter, ask yourself this
essential question: Who, specifically, will be concerned about
what I have to say in this cover letter? That person has a name
and it sure isn't, "To whom it may concern!"
About Author :
Jimmy Sweeney is the president of CareerJimmy and author of the
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