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In the Flesh: Three Tips to Journaling Believable Characters By
Barbara Carr Phillips
Writers are natural observers. We note characteristics about
people that others miss. How many times have you observed
someone, and then revealed that observation to a friend who
said, "Yes, yes, that is exactly right! I could not put my
finger on what impressed me about that person before." Here are
three journaling tips that will develop your skill of
observation.
Tip #1: Choose a Character of the Week
You might not describe your character's physical appearance at
the beginning of your novel, but knowing what he or she looks
like will open opportunities to you as you write. Every day we
are in contact with others, whether it's our family, the grocery
store clerk or the woman sitting in the car ahead of you at the
stoplight. Choose one real person every week to write about in
your journal. Write a page about this person, as though you were
looking at her through a one-inch picture frame. Include every
physical detail: clothing, jewelry, hairstyle, skin tone,
fingernails, facial expressions and mannerisms. If you don't
know her name, give one to her. You may discover a character who
is ready to bump into the main character of that novel you are
working on!
Tip #2: Create your Character's Goal Log
Select one character of the week (from Tip #1). It's time to
develop this character's motivation. Step into your character's
shoes and write a personal goal log. It will be similar to a
goal log that you would write for yourself. Write about both
long-term goals, (saving a million dollars, retiring to Tuscany)
and short-term goals, (losing weight, learning to play guitar).
Write about why these goals are important to your character.
Include all the steps your character will have to take to
achieve his or her goals, along with the obstacles he or she may
encounter along the way. Some of the goals should be very
difficult to achieve or open-ended, just like they are in real
life. As you log your character through a difficult goal, which
challenges will she or he overcome? Which ones will cause them
to give up?
Tip #3: Interview a Character
Leaf through a copy of an old magazine. Cut out a picture of an
interesting character. Tape it in your journal. On the opposite
page, write interview questions to this person. Answer the
questions with your imagination. Having a picture of the person
to focus on will help you do that. Write detailed questions, in
the present, that relate to the setting of your story. For
example, if your story unfolds in Biloxy, Mississippi, but your
character looks like a New Yorker, don't ask him, "Were you born
in New York City?" Ask, "How did you end up here, at the Whistle
Stop Café, with one beat-up suitcase and no money for a return
ticket?"
Your writer's journal can help you create characters for your
short stories and novels that readers will understand and enjoy.
If your reader believes your character, he or she will also
believe your story.
About Author :
Barbara Carr Phillips, journal instructor, believes dreams come
true when you learn to journal your way to success. Visit
http://journalworkshops.net to order your one-on-one journaling
session or to sign up for her free e-zine.