22 Feb 2008 03:51:01 | Vincent Czaplyski
Why are you reading this sentence?
I’ll bet you a steak at Ruth Chris it’s because of the implied
promise of the title. That promise – that you’ll soon be privy
to five well guarded secrets of writing great sales copy – just
grabbed the skeptic in you by the scruff of the neck. It stood
her on her heels and made her think, if only for a split second,
that maybe there’s some gold here.
So the title – or headline if you prefer to think of it that way
– did its job. It got you to read the next sentence by arousing
your curiosity. It probably made you feel that you could profit
from these secrets. In other words it appealed to your sense of
greed. And it might even have touched a couple of your other
emotional triggers, like vanity or laziness, (or more
positively) pride.
I don’t know you well enough to say exactly which emotional hot
button it triggered in you, but you’re still reading aren’t you?
So I’ll up the ante. A bottle of good wine to go with the steak
says some basic emotion was triggered.
All of which leads us to Secret #1: People buy things for
emotional, not logical reasons.
And the emotions that count most are whichever ones your copy
stirs up in your prospect. Your prospect doesn’t care one tiny
little bit about you or your product. She could care less if she
never heard from you again. What she cares about is that little
voice inside her head that keeps asking, “What’s in it for me?”
Never forget this. Your copy must keep answering that question
until your prospect is completely involved with your message. If
your copy starts off telling about your product and not what it
can do for your prospect, it is almost certainly doomed to
failure.
Secret # 2: Good copy helps the prospect picture your promise in
her mind’s eye.
It isn’t good enough to just make a promise. You need to further
involve your prospect by helping her picture herself
experiencing your promise. She has to be able to see it, taste
it, and feel it. Otherwise the skeptic in her will step right
back in and start giving her reasons to disbelieve your promise.
You need to tell her something like this:
“Imagine a hundred of your business peers jumping to their feet
in wild applause as you accept your industry’s top marketing
award. Then the room grows still, the audience hanging on your
every word as you begin to tell the story of how five powerful
copywriting secrets changed your life…”
Think of the last car commercial you watched. Probably strong on
breathtaking mountain roads, beaches at sunset and sexy models –
emotional appeals all. Do they have anything to do with cars?
No. Do they help sell a lot of cars – you bet they do.
Secret #3: Once she can picture your promise for herself, she’s
ready for logical proof.
You’ve got her where you want her. Your words have carried her
away to some place in her imagination where your product makes
her feel more powerful, sexier, smarter, more beautiful –
whatever. She really wants to believe it – all of it. She’s
letting her mind run a little wild. She’s got the top down on
the car you want her to buy. She’s downshifting into third gear
coming around a hairpin turn. Her hair is blowing in the wind,
the sun is on her face and a blue ocean sparkles in the
background.
But around the next corner is Ms. Skeptic, just waiting to throw
cold water on this carefully crafted picture.
It’s your job to make sure she never even sees little Ms.
Skeptic. You reassure her with testimonials. You tell her salt
air won’t harm the paint job. You let her know that this car has
the best safety record of anything in its class, and she’ll
never have to worry about breaking down again. In other words,
you give her logical reasons to justify her emotional decision.
Secret #4: Your copy should focus on a single primary benefit –
your Unique Selling Proposition
Every product should have one special selling point that sets it
apart from every other product in its class. It’s your job to
find out what that Unique Selling Proposition is and never let
your prospect forget it. It’s OK to mention other benefits, but
you should drive home the USP more than any other point.
Recognize these classic USP’s? They sold a lot of products…
“We’re number two – we try harder.” “Your pizza delivered in 30
minutes or less, or it’s free.”
Secret #5: Always include a specific offer and ask for action.
You’re almost there. You’ve made her a promise that hooked her
emotionally. You helped her see herself living that promise. You
gave her plenty of proof that she was making the right decision,
and you stressed your product’s USP throughout your copy.
There’s just one thing left to do. You look her in the eyes and
state your offer clearly. Then tell her what she must do to get
it. In other words, you close the sale.
To summarize: • Make a PROMISE • Let your prospect PICTURE the
benefits • Supply the PROOF that you are telling the truth •
Stress the UNIQUE SELLING PROPOSITION • CLOSE the sale by making
a specific OFFER.
About Author :
Copywriter Vincent Czaplyski owns Hampshire Cove Marketing,
Inc., which provides copywriting and marketing services and
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